Week 4 - 4th Feb - Presentation

Feedback from presentation 1:

THEME: LOSS - this should drive our animation

Animation reference which shows loss:

Father and Daughter animation - Michael Dudok De Wit

Spirit- could be the characters last breathe

Story improvements:

- Loss- memories would be about that, how his life changes- contrast in mood

- Remembrance of her

- Sound- emphasise the memories

- Memories- our way of taking through a journey

- Key statements

- Revisits places but isn't the same

- No grave!

Basically home section in book will emphasise his loss of the wife